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phat af, don't know how you do this with just sytrus

DeadbushiaYT responds:

A lot of camel crusher!

Sounds nice, the faster tempo works better than I thought it would.

Davidgotskill responds:

It crashed after i rendered the project and i was trying to export midi or the instruments. Anyway, i dont think it saved the last version so i guess ill have to call it done. So yes it turned out ok with the fast tempo.

Right after you tell me my music isn't original, and that I need to learn music theory.

Davidgotskill responds:

THIS SONG IS ORIGINAL

Garageband. Very nice arrangement.

VorticityMusic responds:

Thanks!

I know exactly what you used for this one, but there's too much going on at once, and also the gaps in between don't sound very good.

Davidgotskill responds:

Yes the layering needed work. But sometimes I just use silence as a drop. Apparently u don't like that do maybe I'll try something different. Thanks for the corrective criticism. I used GarageBand's loops

Requires better mixing. Your melody is too loud, and comes out of nowhere. I can definitely hear some Xtrullor in here. Other than that it's good

Davidgotskill responds:

Well, I only used one pack but that's debatable. I see. THE RUBBER DUCKY IS SUPER HILARIOUS. A SQUEEEEEEEEKKKK! PUNCH!

Ok about the melody, most of my songs' melodies are way too soft. So I had to do some compression and a lot to make it just right at the right parts volume wise. The mixing is random becuase I limited myself to one pack. Thanks for the feedback.

The cutoffs are kinda ew, but other than that it's okay

Davidgotskill responds:

Yeah I thought a silence was good to bring in a new part. I was wrong.

There's some really quick cutoffs that I don't really like, but other than that it's a very-well arranged song.

Davidgotskill responds:

Yeah agreed. I actually downloaded one of their Kits and I made it from the loops they gave me. It's fun to do

It's really heavy and deep, which I like, but it seems a bit slow, and the melodies are pretty good.

Ndorphins responds:

thank you, its at 130 bpm but i personally wanted it to be this pace.

The drums aren't really synced and the melodies are decent. It doesn't really have much to it.

CREEPERPIG990 responds:

I told you it was bad xD

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