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Garageband. Very nice arrangement.

VorticityMusic responds:

Thanks!

eh, there's not much to it, and it's a bit annoying. But a good start

I know exactly what you used for this one, but there's too much going on at once, and also the gaps in between don't sound very good.

Davidgotskill responds:

Yes the layering needed work. But sometimes I just use silence as a drop. Apparently u don't like that do maybe I'll try something different. Thanks for the corrective criticism. I used GarageBand's loops

Sounds great. Very accurate notes, and very intense and driving

Requires better mixing. Your melody is too loud, and comes out of nowhere. I can definitely hear some Xtrullor in here. Other than that it's good

Davidgotskill responds:

Well, I only used one pack but that's debatable. I see. THE RUBBER DUCKY IS SUPER HILARIOUS. A SQUEEEEEEEEKKKK! PUNCH!

Ok about the melody, most of my songs' melodies are way too soft. So I had to do some compression and a lot to make it just right at the right parts volume wise. The mixing is random becuase I limited myself to one pack. Thanks for the feedback.

The cutoffs are kinda ew, but other than that it's okay

Davidgotskill responds:

Yeah I thought a silence was good to bring in a new part. I was wrong.

There's some really quick cutoffs that I don't really like, but other than that it's a very-well arranged song.

Davidgotskill responds:

Yeah agreed. I actually downloaded one of their Kits and I made it from the loops they gave me. It's fun to do

The lyrics sound like:
Big fat belly oh
Kick the bucket uh right up
And other variations of that.
I like the non-vocal version better

The synths are overpowering and cover up the other stuff. But other than that it's good

It sounds pretty good, but I don't really like those drums, and the wobble is too loud vv

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